汉译英参考--2009年中国社科院考博英语汉翻英

科学杰出之处就在于它能创造人为的可控之物,科学和工程学使我们能够建造我们今天得以生活在其中的部分人工化了的环境,在这个环境里充满了无数大桥、卡车、飞机、抗生素和基因变异物种。我们很有可能建造一个日益更加人为化,也因而渐渐更加可知的未来世界。

Outstanding science lies in its ability to create things artificially controllable. Science and engineering have helped make the environment we live in already partly man-made, filled with countless bridges, trucks, aircrafts, antibiotics and genetically modified species. We are likely to build a world increasingly man-made, and thereby gradually more predictable future world.

有两种局限性制约着预测能力的发展。首先,随着科学和工程学所创造的东西越来越大,越来越复杂,这些东西本身很可能变得不可预测。例如, 大型软件,随着其自身的扩展和完善,能发展成一个程度的自然物所具有的复杂性,且获得一定能力,来干扰或以不可预测的方式进行活动。

Two limitations restrict predictability. First, as science and engineering has created something larger and more complex, these things themselves are likely to become unpredictable. For example, large-scale software, along with its own expansion and improvement, can grow as complex as natural objects are and acquire a certain capacity to counteract prediction or act in unpredictable ways.


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回复回复caicai[2012-02-16 03:41 PM | del]
肖老师:
    您好!!
   这是我基础班时老师叫我们写的作文,还请肖老师帮我修改一下啊!!
   谢谢!!
            HOW  TO  Eliminate  Fake   Diplomas  

    IS  the  diplomas   very   important?  Yes!  most of  no diplomas  pepole  need fake diplomas.And this  phenomenon  become  more  and   more  popular.  does  it  means  we don't  go to  shcool?  do  we  can  direct  buy fake diplomas?
   However,  the  answer,unequivocally,is  no. we use fake  diplomas  to  get good  job,comfortable  life  ,but  these  are  short  time  .i  saw  the  report  from  TV:  a  girl  goes  such  wrong  for  a  job.she  got it.she  lied  everyday  and  she  felt very  uneasy.Finally,The  company  found  the  fake  diplomas ,and  fired  her  .Until  a few years  ago a classmate of mine went to  such  wrong  doing  for  english,but  now his  company  fired  him.
      We  get  rid of  this phenomenon, we  should't  support  it  ,we  must  go  to  school  for  getting  diplomas.And the  goverments  must  eliminate  it,take  aplan  about  it.
      Yes,we  need  a  harmony   society .  a  cozy  life  and  we make  an  effort  to  getting  these.
回复来自 萧老师 的评论 萧老师 于 2012-02-17 00:49 AM 回复
好的。你的进步很大--能够写这么多了,哈哈。下面是我按你的顺序列举改的句子和部分,小横线后是我改的,既有语法也有连贯的问题。以后写文章要把握讲的方法再复习一遍,哈哈。祝你进步!


IS the diplomas very important?
--Are diplomas very important?  or  Is the diploma very important?
--问句和下文不连贯。根据上下文此句应重写为:An ever-increasing importance, it seems, is being placed upon a single diploma.

most of  no diplomas  pepole  need fake diplomas.
--Most people without diplomas need fake ones (have to turn to fake ones for help).

And this  phenomenon  become  more  and   more  popular.  
--And this phenomenon becomes more and more wide-spread.

does  it  means  we don't  go to  shcool?
--Does it mean that we don’t have to go to school?

do  we  can  direct  buy fake diplomas?
--Can we buy fake diplomas directly?

we use fake  diplomas  to  get good  job,comfortable  life  ,but  these  are  short  time.
--We may use fake diplomas to get good jobs and comfortable life, but this policy is only short-sighted and expects only to last very limited time.

i  saw  the  report  from  TV:  a  girl  goes  such  wrong  for  a  job.she  got it.she  lied  everyday  and  she  felt very  uneasy.Finally,The  company  found  the  fake  diplomas ,and  fired  her  .
--Here is a TV report: A girl did such wrong in order to get a job, and, she made it. However, for such a wrongdoing she had to tell consistent lies almost every working day. She felt very uneasy. Finally, the company got to know the truth and fired her.

Until  a few years  ago a classmate of mine went to  such  wrong  doing  for  english,but  now his  company  fired  him.
--Another story, for example. Only a few years ago, a classmate of mine bought a counterfeited/invented/made-up/forged credential to certify that she had passed a major English proficiency exam. Certainly you know better to improve your English if fluent English is wanted of an employee. My friend got in a company with the bought certificate but was purged with her bad English.  

We  get  rid of  this phenomenon, we  should't  support  it  ,we  must  go  to  school  for  getting  diplomas.And the  goverments  must  eliminate  it,take  aplan  about  it. Yes,we  need  a  harmony   society .  a  cozy  life  and  we make  an  effort  to  getting  these.
--结尾要注意文章立意和原文的连贯,修改如下:Indeed, so much importance has been being imposed on a sheet of paper that so many fake diplomas are found in job application and career promotion. Our best policy to eliminate the fake diplomas is that we everybody be not supportive in the wrongdoing by holding on to a belief that diploma is not everything and wrong diploma is nothing. Yes, we need a harmonious society, and, a comfortable life, but, let’s work hard to achieve them, and for us students prepared for a decent future job, let's
go to school to earn it.
回复回复涛哥[2010-01-26 12:17 AM | del]
多谢肖老师的帮助。
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