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萧老师 [2015-04-26 12:13 AM]
六年后那学生冒出来以一个狗屁律师的口吻要求删除这条微博?怎么可能,聊以删除其个人所有个人信息以保护其隐私。鉴于其最近还“热心”关注本博,其它真话不予置评,免得她涨了姿势还认为害了其名声。
caicai [2012-02-17 11:25 AM]
肖老师:
您好! 这是我另外一篇作文,麻烦您再帮我修改一下啊!谢谢!
ON   Aging    Society

    The world is profoundly aging , china too. the phenomenon  is  being everywhere in the  world. There are the old. We don't worry about this.
    Tt  is  true  that  the  old  have more experience than  the young .the have  rich wisdom. most of  enterprise  hire  them. Indeed, many uncle is  70  years  old, his boss  let  him  continue  working  as  engineer. Another man   who i  know  he is  64 years  old.  he is  a professor  in  university. Though  he  don't  want to work ,the leader  answer  him  to  get  high  salary  for  his  working .All  of  this, the  old has  value.
     However, we must  bear  the  burden  casued  by  the aging problem. we  must  face  it.any  society  must  be   care  of  the  old, we   don't  think  the  old  is  trouble .  Besides,the  goverment  should  make  the plan  about  the  old.
     TO  couclue,  don't  worry  about  the  old,  we  should  respect them, we should  agree  the  old  and  get  them  more  loves.

回复来自 萧老师 的评论 萧老师 于 2012-02-17 07:05 PM 回复
小caicai呀, 你能不能按我上次给你改的样子自己重写一下--这样才对你真正有用嘛;别重复老问题就是进步,一定注意句子的正确和完整性哈。重写后我一定改哟。
萧老师 [2012-02-17 01:24 AM]
何为dudu,哈哈,留个真名何尝不可?今天才看到你将评论发在了“学习体会”中。
我想说的GS就是基础, G是基础的基础,是原则的元则;S是基础的实践,是践行基础的实践。何为锻炼,何为实践?就是要去创造美好,走向美好。与大家分享一段亚里士多德关于这方面的论述以引领我们坚信我们的文字GS理性就是通过文字(英语)而创造美好的世界:
Aristotle believed that the good for humans would be the maximum realization of the function that was unique to humans. Since reason was understood by Aristotle to be the unique quality that humans possessed, it followed that the good for humans was to reason well. Since part of the task of reason was to teach human beings how to act virtuously, the good for humans was the exercise of their faculties in accordance with virtue. The good life, then, was defined by Aristotle as the activity of the soul in accordance with virtue. Virtue consisted of intellectual virtue and moral virtue. Intellectual virtue was comprised of theoretical wisdom, practical wisdom and understanding. Experience and time were necessary requirements for the development of intellectual virtue. Moral virtue was controlled by practical wisdom and owed its development to habit.
caicai [2012-02-16 03:41 PM]
肖老师:
    您好!!
   这是我基础班时老师叫我们写的作文,还请肖老师帮我修改一下啊!!
   谢谢!!
            HOW  TO  Eliminate  Fake   Diplomas  

    IS  the  diplomas   very   important?  Yes!  most of  no diplomas  pepole  need fake diplomas.And this  phenomenon  become  more  and   more  popular.  does  it  means  we don't  go to  shcool?  do  we  can  direct  buy fake diplomas?
   However,  the  answer,unequivocally,is  no. we use fake  diplomas  to  get good  job,comfortable  life  ,but  these  are  short  time  .i  saw  the  report  from  TV:  a  girl  goes  such  wrong  for  a  job.she  got it.she  lied  everyday  and  she  felt very  uneasy.Finally,The  company  found  the  fake  diplomas ,and  fired  her  .Until  a few years  ago a classmate of mine went to  such  wrong  doing  for  english,but  now his  company  fired  him.
      We  get  rid of  this phenomenon, we  should't  support  it  ,we  must  go  to  school  for  getting  diplomas.And the  goverments  must  eliminate  it,take  aplan  about  it.
      Yes,we  need  a  harmony   society .  a  cozy  life  and  we make  an  effort  to  getting  these.
回复来自 萧老师 的评论 萧老师 于 2012-02-17 00:49 AM 回复
好的。你的进步很大--能够写这么多了,哈哈。下面是我按你的顺序列举改的句子和部分,小横线后是我改的,既有语法也有连贯的问题。以后写文章要把握讲的方法再复习一遍,哈哈。祝你进步!


IS the diplomas very important?
--Are diplomas very important?  or  Is the diploma very important?
--问句和下文不连贯。根据上下文此句应重写为:An ever-increasing importance, it seems, is being placed upon a single diploma.

most of  no diplomas  pepole  need fake diplomas.
--Most people without diplomas need fake ones (have to turn to fake ones for help).

And this  phenomenon  become  more  and   more  popular.  
--And this phenomenon becomes more and more wide-spread.

does  it  means  we don't  go to  shcool?
--Does it mean that we don’t have to go to school?

do  we  can  direct  buy fake diplomas?
--Can we buy fake diplomas directly?

we use fake  diplomas  to  get good  job,comfortable  life  ,but  these  are  short  time.
--We may use fake diplomas to get good jobs and comfortable life, but this policy is only short-sighted and expects only to last very limited time.

i  saw  the  report  from  TV:  a  girl  goes  such  wrong  for  a  job.she  got it.she  lied  everyday  and  she  felt very  uneasy.Finally,The  company  found  the  fake  diplomas ,and  fired  her  .
--Here is a TV report: A girl did such wrong in order to get a job, and, she made it. However, for such a wrongdoing she had to tell consistent lies almost every working day. She felt very uneasy. Finally, the company got to know the truth and fired her.

Until  a few years  ago a classmate of mine went to  such  wrong  doing  for  english,but  now his  company  fired  him.
--Another story, for example. Only a few years ago, a classmate of mine bought a counterfeited/invented/made-up/forged credential to certify that she had passed a major English proficiency exam. Certainly you know better to improve your English if fluent English is wanted of an employee. My friend got in a company with the bought certificate but was purged with her bad English.  

We  get  rid of  this phenomenon, we  should't  support  it  ,we  must  go  to  school  for  getting  diplomas.And the  goverments  must  eliminate  it,take  aplan  about  it. Yes,we  need  a  harmony   society .  a  cozy  life  and  we make  an  effort  to  getting  these.
--结尾要注意文章立意和原文的连贯,修改如下:Indeed, so much importance has been being imposed on a sheet of paper that so many fake diplomas are found in job application and career promotion. Our best policy to eliminate the fake diplomas is that we everybody be not supportive in the wrongdoing by holding on to a belief that diploma is not everything and wrong diploma is nothing. Yes, we need a harmonious society, and, a comfortable life, but, let’s work hard to achieve them, and for us students prepared for a decent future job, let's
go to school to earn it.
涛哥 [2010-01-26 12:17 AM]
多谢肖老师的帮助。
涛哥 [2010-01-24 11:38 PM]
很好!
JessieHe [2010-01-22 11:16 AM]
“异彩美” vs. “中和美”
    学贯中西,博古通今,(文理兼收)—总觉得那是一种至高的境界,而这些于大师身上都能演绎地如此完美!
    古人云:善琴者,从容豁达;善棋者,筹谋睿智;善书者,至情至性; 善画者,至善至美—琴、棋、书、画谓之“四艺”。
    对音乐和乐器似乎从小就有一种痴迷,小学时跟老师学过口琴和电子琴;大学时一次偶然的机会爱上了吉他,学琴的经历至今仍历历在目;由于对中国古典民族乐器美的向往,也跟爸爸学过一阵二胡,呵呵!虽然他拉得也不是那么的好;但自己最喜欢的还是那扣人心弦的钢琴声,曾以为能弹奏一些理查德的钢琴曲如《梦中的婚礼》、《秋日思雨》便是很了不起的事情,现在看来那样的想法真是太幼稚了!呵呵!老师说得对,那些流行的曲子更适合累了或闲暇时弹弹,还是要多听多练一些古典的乐曲。想起了傅老师的那句话“回归元典” 弹琴如同读书做学问一样,唯有博古才能通今;唯有持之以恒方能日益进取;唯有“心无万物”才能“至善至美,至高至远”!练琴更重于对人“宁静致远,大善大美”的品格的磨练与培养。
    《论语.述而》曰:“子在齐闻《韶》,三月不知肉味,曰:‘不图为乐之至于斯也。’”美的音乐是无法用任何言语来表达的“如空中之音,相中之色,水中之月,镜中之象,言有尽而意无穷”。“美”者, “羊大也”;音乐之美更是一种主观感受与享受,中西方对美的标准表面看来相去甚远,但Great music knows no bounds!竹笛和吉他这两种乐器的结合,正如同读书做学问需学贯中西一样,在我看来也恰是一种尝试与创新,于“不和谐”中渗透着“和谐”,于“不完美”中彰显着完美,有如屈原的《离骚》—体现的正是与当时主流文化“中和美”相背的“异彩美”。
    萨顶顶的音乐中融合了多种异国异域的文化,多种语言,多种器乐……试图对音乐之美进行一种全新的诠释与探索,“大方无隅,大器晚成,大音希声,大象无形”,大美之乐—归真反朴的大自然纯朴气息,空灵的心境需我们用心细细体会,细细品味!
    

JessieHe [2010-01-17 04:07 PM]
Knowledge vs. Wisdom How to realize my dream?

    As the saying goes--Knowledge is powerful; It is never too old to learn etc.. But, do you know, simply equal, knowledge and wisdom have never been and never will be.
    Just look at these two Chinese characters “” and “” and there are something seemingly different—the additional component in “智” either conveying the implication “light” represented by “”(ri), or symbolizing “articulation” by “” (yue). Only when knowledge ascends into the wisdom does learning seems to have the significance, more accurate and full, and could characters and sounds be internalized into an organic whole to express our thoughts—peculiar human thoughts!
    How interesting the human language is—the indirectness between the signifier and the signified, just as the translation problem, the incommensurability between the source culture and the target one. No words have exhausted meanings!

    To learn is for polishing our thoughts;
    To learn is for pursuing the wisdom

    “愚者暗于成事,智者见于未萌” (Sorry I don’t know the exact translation…)

回复来自 萧老师 的评论 萧老师 于 2010-01-19 00:16 AM 回复
No translation can claim exact accuracy. Then, a trial --

A fool sees not the visible; a sage see the not visible.
A fool ignores; a sage predicts.
A fool is blind to the patent; a sage is mindful of the latent.
JessieHe [2010-01-17 04:02 PM]
Fly High into the Sky!
    As a creature, I eat and sleep; as a man, I read and dream. The former serves the needs of my body; the latter, my minds.
    The beauty of dream, in my humble opinion, in terms of any human meaning is meaningless; it is the beautiful sound from another world behind and beyond, soaring higher and farther than anyone in the real world dares to dream, and leaves us indefinable longing and regret.
    Several classic and profound sentences, from some popular movies, are as follows. Here I also want to share with you, my friends.
    “Life is a box of chocolate, and we never know what we are going to get next.” –from Forrest Gump said by Forrest’s mother.《阿甘正传》
     “Yesterday is history, tomorrow is mystery, and now is present (gift)”—from Kongfu Panda said by master tortoise.《功夫熊猫》
     “Get busy living or get busy dying.” –from Shawshank’s Redemption said by Andy《肖申克的救赎》
萧老师 [2010-01-17 00:03 AM]
哈哈 题目这儿就不提了, 上课时再讲吧, 害怕引起不必要的误解和混乱。
而且, 再次提醒大家, 我的GS作文法不在于能写某些题目, 而在于拥有智慧和眼光(价值判断)去写天下文章, 这一点我们当然还会在课堂的阅读训练中进一步强化大家的思维。